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 '''[[Vultro the Fox]]'''
-Vultro is a fennec fox and the tallest and skinniest among his friends. He has very large ears, light brown fur, and a tuft of spiky white hair. He also wears a pair of red sneakers and white gloves. He does not always think about the consequences of his actions, which often lands him in trouble.
+A fennec fox and the tallest and skinniest among his friends. He has trademark large ears, cream colored fur, and spiky white hair. His sneakers are blue and red, and he usually wears white gloves. He does not always think about the consequences of his actions, which often lands him in trouble.
-He constructed the spaceship set to land on Ethos, proving he can be quite resourceful.
 '''[[Raven the Gray Wolf]]'''
-Raven is a gray wolf, born in the Sol dimension. She has a natural connection to the 7 Sol Emeralds. She has a light gray muzzle, wears dark blue armor, and has specially crafted combat boots. A fierce warrior with a somewhat coarse personality, Raven usually only shows her inner kindness to her closest friends, and very rarely at that.
+Raven is a tall gray wolf born in the Sol dimension. She has a natural connection to the Sol Emeralds. She has a light gray muzzle, blue plated armor, and has specially crafted black combat boots. A fierce warrior with a coarse personality, Raven usually only shows her inner kindness to her closest friends, and very rarely at that.
-As the heir apparent guardian of the Sol dimension, she is sometimes allowed possession of the Sol Emeralds.
+As an assistant guardian of the Sol dimension, she is sometimes allowed possession of the Sol Emeralds.
 '''[[Wreck the Fox]]'''
-Wreck is a black fox with slicked-back spiky hair, blonde chest fur, yellow eyes, and white boots and gloves. He is the strongest on the team and his brute strength can take on most foes that he encounters. He is the love interest of Frankie and agreed to come along on the journey with the promise of some sort of surprise from her when they arrive.
+Wreck is a muscular black fox with slicked spiky hair, blonde chest fur, and golden yellow eyes. He usually wears white boots and matching gloves. He is the strongest of the crew, and his brute strength can take on most foes that he encounters. He is dating Frankie the Bat, and agreed to come along on the journey with the promise of some sort of surprise from her when they arrive.
 Wreck met Vultro three years prior to this story, on an adventure called The Secret of Robots.
 '''[[Frankie the Bat]]'''
-Frances “Frankie” the Bat is a skinny red bat with brown eyes, yellow and purple boots, brown gloves, and a light blue tank top and bandana. She is the love interest of Wreck and traveled with him on this trip with the idea of bringing him on a surprise romantic date on an exotic planet. Her flight abilities make her a useful addition to the team, along with her speed and agility while in the air.
+Frances “Frankie” the Bat is a skinny red bat with brown eyes, yellow and purple boots, brown gloves, and a light blue tank top and bandana. She is the girlfriend of Wreck and traveled with him on this trip with the idea of bringing him on a surprise romantic date on an exotic planet. Her flight abilities make her a useful addition to the team, along with her speed and agility while in the air.
 She also has heightened hearing and can hear sounds from a much further distance than the rest of the team.
 '''[[Tracker the Dog]]'''
-Tracker is a yellow bloodhound from the city of Techtown, a cybercity famous for its technology and unique regional accent. The son of Leon, the leader of the Techtown Freedom Fighters, Tracker lived in Techtown until he was chosen to embark to Mobius. He believes that visiting Ethos is an integral part of his mission.
+Tracker is an orange bloodhound from the city of Techtown, a cybercity famous for its technology and unique regional accent. The son of Leon, the leader of the Techtown Freedom Fighters, Tracker lived in Techtown until he was chosen to embark to Mobius. He believes that visiting Ethos is an integral part of his mission.
 He has an incredible sense of smell that allows him to track a scent for miles and brings with him some very advanced technical knowledge.
 '''[[Cync the Cat]]'''
-Cyncatia “Cync” the Cat is a light blue wildcat and a new friend of Vultro’s. She has green eyes, loves the color pink, and has long curly hair. Cync met Vultro shortly before the events of this story, and they became quick friends.
+Cyncatia “Cync” the Cat is a light blue cat and the newest friend of Vultro. She has long curly brown hair with pink highlights, green eyes, and wears a light blue tank top with black shorts. Cync met Vultro shortly before the events of this story, and they became quick friends.
-She has a unique shapeshifting ability that enables her to take the form of many natural creatures, including her friends and enemies.
+She has a unique shapeshifting ability that enables her to take the form of many creatures, including her friends and enemies.
 '''[[Jenny the Fox]]'''
 Jennifer “Jenny” the Fox is an arctic fox from Mobius. She is similar in size to Vultro, sporting platinum-blue fur, a bushy tail, and purple gloves and clothing. She is skinny and fast like Vultro too, being able to outrun many of her foes. She never knew her father, but she was extensively trained by her mother in Chaos magic as she grew up.
 She can cast spells using Chaos energy, some even without possession of a Chaos Emerald.