Planet Eilaela (story)

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Rules:

Lemme lay down the law:

1. Anyone can join, and anyone write the story, if they have a character in it. Must be approved by me though.
2. No godmodding.
3. Do not use other characters with out the permission of others (NOTE: This WILL be done by me if you join late to intertwine you with the story, but that's only to prevent plotholes)
4. You can not switch sides.
5. Please be patient when editing.
6. Please message on the talk page if anything.
7. Maximum 10 contributors per side, except mastermind. Only one of those.
8. Have fun!

Participants

Leave your signature here if you are participating.

You'll live. Only the best get killed. (talk) 22:40, July 7, 2013 (UTC)

Be scared of the fuzion of fire and ice! ~ The Fuzion Wolf 00:39, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Maria1234567890 (talk) 10:40, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

TailsXFire(click here) 8:30,July 11, 2013 (UTC)

SUPER GREEN POWERS (talk) 21:37, January 20, 2014 (UTC) AwsomeSONICfan (talk) 21:33, February 1, 2014 (UTC)

User:Another one of those fans ( talk) 11:43, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Overview

Ten inhabitants of Mobius embark on an epic adventure to a nearby planet. But when their spaceship malfuctions, they crash land on the mysterious planet of Elilaela. Little do they know, there was an evil lurking on the surface ran by a mastermind that is as mysterious as the planet that he inhabits.

Included Characters

Please add your character under your desired side below. Also include their main skill, e.g. Speed, Power, Flying, Knowledge... Optimally, create a page for said character, and be sure to link your username afterwards. Follow mine as an example. If you are approved, your character will be greenlinked. If denied, it will be redlinked and later removed. If it's not too rediculous you should be fine.

Heroes

1. Vultro the Fennec (Small Size/Agility, er1c1996)

2. RavenCool the Sol Grey Wolf (Power/Speed, 24.58.83.171)

3. Wreck the Fox (Speed/Strength, 92.4.213.78)

4. Frankie the Bat (Flight/Speed 92.4.213.78)

5. Tracker the Dog (General Skills/Muscle 92.4.213.78)

6.Spark the Hedgecat (Shapeshifting/General Skills 97.82.153.89)

7. Jenny the Fox (Cleverness/Magic 92.4.213.78)

8. Terry the beaver (Strangeness/Swiftness 92.4.213.78)

9. Lighting/Kaminari the Hedgehog (Speed/Height User:24.58.83.171)

10.sico the cat (thunder and transformation)

Met on the Planet

1. Shimmer the Hedgehog (Speed/Fire/Teleportation Maria1234567890)

2. Penelope the Hedgehog (Telekinesis/Electrokinesis Maria1234567890)

3. Komerl The Hegehog (Pyrokenesis/Speed/Chaos/Other RedRush3999)

4.Verbento the rhino(another one of those fans possesion(body swap sometimes)/chaos/fast learner)

5.Draco the dragon(another one of those fans,flight/golden skeleton/slight wind control)

Bosses

1. Databyte Egg (92.4.213.78)

2. Mist the Morph(92.4.213.78)

3. Metal RavenCool (User:24.58.83.171)

4. Lunic the Hedgehog (92.4.213.78)

5.Solidus the Werefox (Ghost) (er1c1996)

6.Ultra shadow android (meme the fox)

7. Metal Silver (User:24.58.83.171)

8.Lord Povenkios (E.B formerly 92.4.213.78)

9.Snarious the snake(Another one of those fans,shapeshifting/quick digging/slithers low in the air)

10.

Mastermind

1.Demitel the Demoncat (User:97.82.153.89)

2.Crego the dragon(Another one of those fans,electricity control/fast flight/slight wind control)

Story

Anyone can write the story, inclusion of the main character Vultro is allowed without permission; will be reviewed by me though. Please make sure to weave you character into the present story if you join late, remember this story starts off with 10 adventurers.

Chapter 1 - Prolouge

(Story begins with everyone on the space ship, heading for the planet Ethos)

Vultro: Alright guys, we should be arriving on Ethos any minute now!

Wreck: Ugh, why Exactly am I here Frankie?

Frankie: It's a surprise. Not a good one, I'd imagine.

Spark: Hey Vultro, where are we anyway?

Vultro: I just told yo guys, we're.... uh oh. That's not good...

Frankie: What? What's not good?

Vultro: We're heading straight for a planet, and it's most certainly NOT Ethos.

Lighting: *asleep*

RavenCool: Ummm.. Vultro? Should I not have taken the Sol Emeralds with me?

Vultro: The WHAT? Oh no, brace for impact!!!!

*KABOOOOOM*

(The spaceship crash lands in a swamp on this mysterious planet.)

RavenCool: Everyone alright? Everyone can swim?

Spark: (transforms into a dolphin) If not, I can give you a ride!

Vultro: (scrambles onto Spark's back) Thank god we brought you along, Spark. Where'd everyone else go?

RavenCool: (swims up) What's the matter Vultro, don't know how to swim?

Vultro: Shut up, Raven.

RavenCool: *growls*

Vultro: (smiling) Just kidding, come on now. Maybe you shouldn't be making fun of me! Where's Wreck and his friends...?

(A short distance away, Wreck and Frankie submerge from the swamp)

Wreck: So much for a nice date Frankie...

(Back with the rest of the crew)

Vultro: Well guys, we should probably try to find a way out of here. The spaceship is obviously out of the question.

(Tracker suddenly pops up from under the water, flailing around until he reaches solid ground)

Tracker: *gasping* Why did the loo blow up- Oh god. This is Ethos?

Vultro: The loo? Is that Techtown slang I hear? But yes Tracker, we crash landed here.

Tracker: As a matter of fact, I spend tonnes of time down in Techtown.

RavenCool: Well, I have the Sol Emeralds still with me, so maybe it's good I brought them...

Vultro: Yeah, good call on that one. Spark, head over to land. We need to see what's around, if anything.

Wreck: Hopefully, we can find someone or something to help.

???: HELP!

Vultro: Oh god, who was that?

Tracker: Beats me, but we'd better find them. It was definitely a female scream…

Wreck: *heads off in direction of where scream came from*

Frankie: (yelling over to the group) HEY GUYS! I'm coming with you!

Tracker: I'd better go too… *follows*

RavenCool: *follows*

???: HEEEELLLLPPP!!!

Vultro: That came from over there!! Spark, follow that scream!

Frankie: Hey look! It's a cave!

Wreck: That must be where the scream came from!

(The group enters the cave.)

Vultro: I hate caves...... *climbs off Spark*

Wreck: Man, this is creepy.

Frankie: No wonder that girl screamed...

???: SAVE ME!

Tracker: Hey, that was a different voice!

Frankie: Something's not right here, we'll be in deep trouble if we're not careful-*gets grabbed*

Wreck: Frankie? Hello? Frankie?

Tracker: She's been captured!

Wreck: Oh GOD NO! NOT FRANKIE!

Vultro: Wait... where's Raven? That must be the other scream!

Lighting: RavenCool, what have you done now?

RavenCool: *far off* HELP!

???: Shh, my Mobian friend. You will be fine, as will your little pals. *puts RavenCool to sleep*

Vultro: Guys, we need to find everyone RIGHT NOW! Let's split up. Spark, Wreck, come with me. Jenny, go with Terry and Tracker.

(silence)

Vultro: Tracker? Tracker..? Oh no.

Chapter 2 - The Bad Guys

???: *very far off* Now I'll just be taking these Sol Emeralds, thank you! Wait... where's the last one?

RavenCool: *tied up* Lets just say it's with a good friend of mine.

Bad ???: Hah! No matter. With the ancient Shoten crystal in my posession, these Sol Emeralds are just a bonus.

RavenCool: No person from the Sol Dimension should be able to use that power! Unless... You are a copy of me. Metal... RavenCool?

(Metal RavenCool steps out of the shadows)

Metal RavenCool: Ha! Oh, but I will. And I will use you and your little friend here as part of my plan!

Frankie: *groans, going in and out of consciousness*

Metal RavenCool: Quiet, flying furball! The Sol Emeralds could be of some use even in part. I can use their energy to amplify the effects of the Shoten crystal!

(Suddenly, a loud rumbling occurs, and the orange glow of lava becomes visible at the other end of the cave.)

RavenCool: Uh.... can we please go somewhere other than here?

Wreck: Alright you hunk of junk! Unhand my Friends!

Terry: Yes! Wreck's gonna save us!

???: Grrr! Silence! Metal, help me create a lava protective form.

Frankie: *faintly* Mist… is that you…? Whoever... you're… working… for… will… be… stopped

Mist: *sarcasm* Oooh, oh nooo, the little stupid weakened bat wants to stop me, ooh oh no. *transforms into Iblis, a demonic fireproof humanoid*

Metal RavenCool: *grabs RavenCool* Lets go. Mist, burn them alive.

Lighting: Hey, give us back RavenCool, Metal!

Vultro:  *whispering to Lightning* Hey, Lightning.... what's that thing Metal's got? It looks like some sort of crystal...

Mist: Oh… heh heh! The little fox wants the Shoten crystal! Wellllll, let me think…NO!

Terry: Hey! Fog-dude! Robot! Give us the Shoti crystal!

Mist and Metal: *laugh and sneer*

Mist: *morphs into Terry* "Hey foggy-thingy! Robot Ravencool! Give us the Shoti-thingy!" *morphs back*

Metal RavenCool: *laughs wildly*

Mist: (stops laughing) Um, Metal. Behind you...

Vultro: *snatches the crystal from behind, raises it up* Just when I thought this would be difficult.

Mist: No wait, don't--!

*a flash of blinding white light fills the cave, causing a massive rumble that knocks everyone off their feet*

(As it fades, Vultro is now floating, and glowing a bright purple)

Vultro: GUYS! GUYS!!! I'm just like Super Sonic! Ha ha, look at me! I look AWESOME!

*BAM, Vultro is hit over the head*

???: Foolsh child. *Vultro falls to the floor unconscious, his fur reverting to normal*

(The mysterious figure picks up the crystal, embedding it in his belt)

???: Gah, I almost went mad without that on me.

Mist: *laughing* Nice one, Solidus!

Solidus: Looks like I showed up at just the right time.

Metal RavenCool: Chaos... Control! *warps away with RavenCool*

(Realizing his restraints were loosened from the blast, Wreck breaks free)

Wreck: Oh, mist, got something for ya. *punches Mist* (who had morphed to his original form)

Wreck: And you too, ghostie? *tries to punch Solidus but goes right through him*

Solidus: Hahaha! It's of no use. *grabs Vultro and teleports in a burt of fire*

Lighting: They got RavenCool! And they have TWO sets of powerful gems!

Lighting: Wait.....RavenCool gave a Sol Emerald to Vultro! But, he's gone too...

Terry: Yeah, that ghost dude may possibly have taken him away…

Frankie: Yeah… We need to sorta, you know. FIND HIM!

Spark: *Pulls out sickle nunchaku and holds it to Mist's throat* Stay down!

Lighting: Guy we sould look for our friends. They could be hurt! RavenCool, please stay alive!

Chapter 3 - Trapped in Isolation

RavenCool: ROAR! (Enters Were-Dragon form) How do you get out of here! *Furiously punches the walls*

???: *from outside the chamber* Will you just shut up already? The chamber is unbreakable!

RavenCool: * sits down *

???: The boss won't be too happy if you keep slacking off, Lunic. Nor will we.

Metal RavenCool: I hope the last time you had to fight my Mobian conterpart, Databyte, she didn't hurt you too bad!

Databyte: I have never fought her in my life you blithering idiot!

Lunic: Will you guys shut up? I'm trying to work here!

(back inside)

Vultro: We'll get out of here Raven, I promise....

RavenCool: If I had the Sol Emeralds, I could get out of here with ease.....

Vultro: I still have that one you gave me.... but I guess one isn't very helpful.

RavenCool: Well... I actually discovered I can channel a form of teleportation with them, like Chaos Control, but the least I've ever tried it with is two. Let's try it with one!

Vultro: My hands are chained.... I can't reach it!

RavenCool:  *uses her tail to pick it up* I have no idea what is going to happen. Hold on tight!

RavenCool: Divine... SOLSTICE! *warps her and Vultro to a unknown area*

Metal RavenCool: Did you hear that...?? Go check on the prisoners, and make sure you take that last Sol Emerald from the fox.

Solidus: What, that worthless gem he was holding? I thought that was just jewlery.

Metal RavenCool: You idiot. The wolf can warp with it! Make sure they didn't leave.

Solidus: (looks into the room) *growls*

Metal RavenCool: What?!

Solidus: The prisoners. They. Escaped.

Lunic: Yeah, you two have fun with that. Seeing as I am doing a job, like you remind me so often!

Solidus: You're the laziest evil villain I've ever met.

Mist: Come on you idiots! They've probably escaped already!

Solidus: *growling* Everyone, STOP! Shut up. Listen. Yes, they escaped. Because of you idiots! Am I the only sens-- oh, what's the word... sensible? sensible! Am I the only sensible villain here?

Databyte: *softly* You're the one who didn't know about the Sol Emerald...

Databyte: Yeah, and your speech was ruined when you forgot the word "sensible."

Mist: *tries to hold in laugh*

Solidus: *Transforms into his Fighting Form* GAAAAH! Without me, you wouldn't have this Shoten crystal, would you?!? Its power is UNMATCHED in the galaxy, and when I use its full power I am nearly invincible!! You all better watch what you say around here before I leave you in a swamp puddle with nothing more the fur on your backs!!! *transforms back* Now... lets find those prisoners.

Chapter 4 - The Reunion

(RavenCool and Vultro land in a tree, within visible distance of the crash site)

RavenCool: Oh my god... it actually worked!

Vultro: (yelling) Hey guuuuuuuuys!

(Frankie hears the call, looking up and smiling when she recognizes them)

Frankie: Hey guys!! (Flies over) Wreck went off. He said he sensed something bad, and wouldn't tell me what. He does that sometimes.

Vultro: That's Wreck for you, always getting into trouble, just like me. Listen, guys. That ghost-dude Solidus took that very powerful crystal from me. I think if we can manage to take it back from him, we can stop all of them! The problem is the Sol emeralds, which are very important to Raven, are almost all in their possession.

RavenCool: Yeah, I don't need a furious cat on my tail about those when I get home. Hey, wheres Lighting?

Frankie: He was captured too. I couldn't see by who, though...

RavenCool: I heard someone that sounded like Metal Silver when me and Vultro was captured, and I heard what sounded like the roar of a dragon right as we arrived here..... *sad* Lighting......

Wreck: *from far away* easy now robot… heh heh… oh god. AAAH! *silence*

Frankie: WRECK!

Terry: Woah! How could anything get past Wreck?

Metal Silver: *has a hold of Wreck*

(RavenCool and Vultro grab on to Frankie, who flies them down to Wreck)

Wreck: (breaks free and looks at Metal Silver) Hey wait… I know you...

Metal Silver: *warps behind Frankie*

Frankie: Wreck! Help me!

Wreck: FRANKIE! NO!

Vultro: Just when I thought the gang was getting back together. Come on guys, we have to follow them!

(The crew set off in the direction of Frankie's screams. Along the way, they encounter a red and gold Hedgehog and a pink Hedgehog, who are holding a gem.)

Shimmer: I can't believe we found a Sol Emerald! If one is here, maybe the other 6 are too!

Penelope: Lets keep searching. I hope there is more life on this planet than just us.

RavenCool: *growls* Give me that Sol Emerald now!

Shimmer: Why should I? I need these emeralds to harness the power of the Sol dimension. Besides, I found it fair and square.

RavenCool: Sol dimension? I'm the guardian of the Sol dimension! You want me to tell Blaze you stole them?! Both of us will end up burnt to a crisp!

Penelope: First of all, Shimm didn't steal them, he found them. And we can loan it to you, if we team up to stop the villains and get the rest of the emeralds. Deal? *puts out her hand to shake*

RavenCool: *reluctantly shakes* Fine.

Shimmer: When we need it, you'll give it back. Understand? *gives RavenCool the Red Sol Emerald*

Penelope: We're we going now?

Shimmer: Lets follow them.

Spark: Who are you two anyways?

Shimmer: I'm Shimmer the Hedgehog.

Penelope: And I'm Penelope! *smiles* And we just made a deal with RavenCool, so now we're apart of your team!! Ask Shimm for the details.

Spark: Cool, I'm Spark.

Penelope: Nice to meet you Spark! *smiles*

Vultro: And I'm Vultro the Fennec. Penelope, Shimmer, nice to meet you.

Shimmer: Nice to meet you, Vultro. *extends his hand*

Penelope: Hi Vultro! *smiles and giggles*

Vultro *shaking Shimmer's hand* We've lost our friend, a bat named Frankie, to one of the villains. There's also a bunch more of us unaccounted for. Want to help us find everyone?

Shimmer: I guess, sure!

RavenCool: A were-hog named Lighting was also captured.

Penelope: Okay, we'll find Lighting too then!

Chapter 5: The Search

Penelope: Okay, if we're going your friends we have to get a move on!

Shimmer: Penny is right. Lets get finding! So where did you last see them?

Spark: *transforms into a dog and smells the air* That way. *points to the east*

Penelope: So lets go!

• the heroes walk for miles in search of their lost friends*

Vultro: Are you sure you're going the right way, Spark...?

Penelope: We've been walking for like, FOREVER! When will we get there?

RavenCool: Thats it. I'm leading, we need a trained wolf nose for this.

Spark: Guys, stop teaming up on me. I'm trying my best...

Penelope: Okay Spark, but let's follow RavenCool instead.

Shimmer: Hmmm. Yes, let's. *follows RavenCool too*

Vultro: Wait RavenCool... should we split up? What if Spark is on to something.

RavenCool: *nods, but starts to catch the smell of a dragon/hedgehog* Shh! It's right on the tip of my nose...

Spark: I smell a cat. It might be someone I know as an enemy, it's NOT a friendly smell.

RavenCool: Well Spark, I smell a were-hog. That would be Lighting.

Shimmer: You guys are both good at smelling.

Vultro: Spark? What direction is that cat smell coming from?

Spark: The one I smell is coming from the northeast!

RavenCool: Well the one I smell is coming from the west.

Tailsalyn: Hello, Whatcha doin'?

Terry: (Fast, in a heavy accent) Lookin' fur a bunch-o-badduns with a bunch-o-mates and some gemmies.

RavenCool: I don't think anyone understood that.

Wreck: ...we are looking for our friends. And my girlfriend. AND a very powerful gemstone. Excuse the beaver.

RavenCool: *continues sniffing*

Wreck: What ya smellin' this time? An cake with legs? Becaus I bet you could smell that.

RavenCool: *following the smell* Shh... I know it's Mobian, I just can't tell what kind.

Terry: What 'appened to being able to make out a were-dragon hedgehog by smell?

Wreck: *mumbles* Shuddup, Terry. Follow the scent, Raven!

RavenCool: There's a million and one scents around me ten times stronger that aren't Lightning, ok? Geez. *keeps following the scent*

Terry: Sorrehhh.

(a faint rumbling is heard behind Wreck)

Wreck: Who's there?

(Suddenly, a menacing figure bursts out of the ground)

???: MWAHAHAHAHA! HARGH-- *Cough cough*

Wreck: No…not you…that is not possible!

RavenCool: Looks like my history teacher, maybe just a tad less evil though.

Wreck: No… it's-

???: LORD POVENKIOS!!

Wreck: I killed you. How is this possible?

Povenkios: IT'S NOT FOR YOU TO KNOW, FURBALL. MR. DARKMALL, I REQUIRE YOU AT ONCE!!

(Darkmall emerges from behind a nearby tree)

Povenkios: GRAHAHAHAHARGHGA *cough* (burrows back into the ground)

Wreck: Darkmall! TELL. ME. HOW!!!

Darkmall: You're gonna have to pry that information from my cold, dead paws.

RavenCool: Galdly.

RavenCool roars loudly, pouncing towards Darkmall. Darkmall grabs her by the throat, then choke slams her down into the dirt.

Vultro: Gaaah, you'll pay for that!!

Vultro glances at Wreck, who nods approvingly. Vultro darts between Darkmall's legs. As Darkmall tries to find him, Vultro chomps down as hard as he can on the back of Darkmall's ankle.

Darkmall: GAAAAHHHH! You annoying pest!!

(Wreck, now behind Darkmall, punches him directly in the back as he is distracted.)

Darkmall: AAAHHH!

Darkmall angrily kicks Vultro off, sending him tumbling into the dirt. He then elbows Wreck, and sweeps his legs out from under him.

Shimmer: Penny, we need to do something!

Penelope: Shimm, we're not fighters, you know that!

Suddenly a spiked chain flies into Darkmall's neck, as it begins to spark and electrocute him. Darkmall grunts and falls to his knees. In jumps a slender, orange cat wearing some kind of high tech armor.

???: The name's Sico. You folks in trouble?

Darkmall: *Lifts up head* I…am not…the kind of guy…who falls-- *bzzp* WHO FALLS IN ONE HIT!!!

Darkmall grabs the spiked chain, yanking it out of his neck. Without any hesitation, he turns and points his hands at Sico.

Darkmall: LAYLO AKRANNA!

Sico is hit by a purple blast of magic, knocking him down off of his feet.

Darkmall: DIVINE... SOLSTICE!

(Darkmall disappears in a flash of green light)

RavenCool: Great. He must be working with the others, he has one of the Sol Emeralds too.

(RavenCool helps Vultro and Sico back onto their feet. Shimmer and Penelope manage to get Wreck up as well. RavenCool kneels down next to Vultro with a concerned look on her face.)

RavenCool: Hey buddy... are you okay? Please be okay.

Vultro: Yes... Raven... I'm fine. Sico, is it?

(Vultro reaches his hand out to shake Sico's)

Vultro: We're trying to stop a bunch of bad guys who stole some very powerful gems and kidnapped our friends. We could use all the help we can get.

Sico: I'm sorry, but I have my own problems to deal with right now. I wish I could help, but I can't. I wish you all the best of luck, though. Nice meeting you Vultro.

(Sico darts off into the forest.)

Wreck: I can't believe this is happening.

The Great Reboot

Guys, er1c1996 here. I have been off the scene for quite a while. But this RP is NOT dead. I have however noticed that it has gotten a little carried away and sloppy since I've left. Therefore, in an attempt to make this a more coherent and mature story, I will be spending the next few days "cleaning up" this fanfiction. Please refrain from making edits unless you are helping remaster the story. This RP will continue and be finished the way I envisioned it!!! You'll live. Only the best get killed. (talk) 01:43, April 7, 2014 (UTC)

Gallery

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  Vultro at the time of this RP.

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  RavenCool at the time of this RP.

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  Wreck as he appeared during this RP.

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  Just wanted to add this picture.

• Tis Lord Povenkios!.png

  Tis Lord Povenkios, master of Dooooooooooooom!

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  Frankie, as she appeared during this RP.

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  Shimmer

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  Penelope