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 Ten inhabitants of Mobius embark on an epic adventure to a nearby planet. But when their spaceship malfuctions, they crash land on the mysterious planet of Elilaela. Little do they know, there was an evil lurking on the surface ran by a mastermind that is as mysterious as the planet that he inhabits.
-==Included Characters==
+==Character Bios==
-Please add your character under your desired side below. Also include their main skill, e.g. Speed, Power, Flying, Knowledge... Optimally, create a page for said character, and be sure to link your username afterwards. Follow mine as an example. If you are approved, your character will be greenlinked. If denied, it will be redlinked and later removed. If it's not too rediculous you should be fine.
+Please add your character under your desired side below. Please add their abilities and a short bio to keep continuity straight.
 '''<u>Heroes</u>'''
 . [[Vultro the Fennec]] (Speed/Agility, [[User:er1c1996|er1c1996]])
+Vultro is a Fennec Fox from [[Mobius]] standing at about 1'2" and weighing only about 5lbs. He has large ears, light brown fur, and white tufts on his head and chest. He also wears a pair of sneakers and white gloves. He is small but fast, able to overtake large enemies and fit into tight spaces. His father's alter ego, Solidus, is present in this story but it is the first time he's ever encountered him. Vultro inherited the ability to transform using the Shoten crystal from his father.
 . [[RavenCool the Sol Grey Wolf]] (Power/Mystic Ability, [[User:24.58.83.171|24.58.83.171]])
+RavenCool is a Grey Wolf that was born in the Sol dimension, a mystical realm controlled by the 7 Sol Emeralds. She has a white muzzle, wears red and blue armor, and has specially crafted boots to fit her paw-like feet (a feature uncommon to Mobians.) At the age of 6, her dad was murdered by a being named Ix, enraging her and causing her to flee to Mobius where she met Vultro. A fierce warrior with a coarse personality, Raven usually only shows her kindness to Vultro. As the guardian of the Sol dimension, she is normally in possession of the Sol Emeralds under the careful watch of [[Blaze the Cat]].
 . [[Wreck the Fox]] (Strength/Stamina, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]])
+Wreck is a Silver Fox who is also from the Sol dimension. Wreck sports jet black fur, white chest fur, yellow eyes, and orange boots and gloves. Unbeknownst to himself, he was born under extraordinary circumstances. The building his mother was giving birth to him in was phased into the Sol dimension by Professor Manticore, creating the first ever Mobius hedgehog imbued with Sol powers. He however was returned to Mobius shortly after and never told of his hidden power. Even without knowing it, his connection to the Sol makes him very strong when near the Sol Emeralds and makes him able to fight for extended periods of time without growing tired.
 . [[Frankie the Bat]] (Flight/Speed [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]])
+Frankie is a slender red bat with brown eyes, yellow and purple boots, black shorts, brown gloves, and a light blue tank top. She is a love interest of Wreck and traveled with him on this trip with the idea of having a romantic date on an exotic planet. Her flight abilities make her a useful addition to the team, along with her speed and agility while in the air. She also has heightened hearing and is able to hear sounds from a much further distance than the rest of the team.
 . [[Tracker the Dog]] (Strength/Smell [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]])
+Tracker is a Bloodhound from the future city of [[Techtown]], a cybercity famous in its time for its technology and unique regional accent (which resembles the real life accent of Northern England.) Born some time in the early 32nd century, Tracker lived in Techtown until he was chosen to embark on a time travel mission to Mobius in order to prevent a millennium-long chain of events that would eventually destroy the town. He elects to come along with Vultro as he believes that visiting Ethos, the original destination, was an integral part of securing the safety of Techtown. He has an incredible sense of smell as well as a considerable amount of strength.
 . Spark the Hedgecat (Shapeshifting [[User:97.82.153.89|97.82.153.89]])
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 . [[Terry the beaver|Terry the Beaver]] (Ingenuity/Swiftness [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]])
+Terry is a Beaver who is also from Techtown. Like Tracker, he was born in the 32nd century, and was sent back in time along with Tracker to prevent the town's destruction. His lack of understanding of what is relatively ancient technology to him, as well as his accent, makes him appear quite dim witted to the group, though he sometimes shows his incredible intelligence in certain situations.
 . Lighting/Kaminari the Hedgehog (Speed/Height [[User:24.58.83.171]])
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 (Tracker suddenly pops up from under the water, flailing around until he reaches solid ground)
-<span style="line-height:20px;">Tracker: *gasping* Why did the loo blow up- Oh god. This is Ethos?</span>
+<span style="line-height:20px;">Tracker: *gasping* Why did the loo blow up- Oh dear. ''This'' is Ethos?</span>
-<span style="line-height:20px;">Vultro: The loo? Is that Techtown slang I hear? But yes Tracker, we crash landed here.</span>
+<span style="line-height:20px;">Vultro: The "loo?" Is that more of your futuristic technobabble? But yes Tracker, we crash landed here.</span>
-<span style="line-height:20px;">Tracker: As a matter of fact, I spend tonnes of time down in [[Techtown]].</span>
+<span style="line-height:20px;">RavenCool: Maybe it's a good thing I brought the emeralds with me...</span>
-<span style="line-height:20px;">RavenCool: Well, I have the Sol Emeralds still with me, so maybe it's good I brought them...</span>
 <span style="line-height:20px;">Vultro: Yeah, good call on that one. Spark, head over to land. We need to see what's around, if anything.</span>
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 Vultro: Oh god, who was that?
-Tracker: Beats me, but we'd better find them. It was definitely a female scream…
+Tracker: 'Aven't the foggiest, but we'd better find them. It was definitely female…
 Wreck: *heads off in direction of where scream came from*
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 Frankie: (yelling over to the group) HEY GUYS! I'm coming with you!
-Tracker: I'd better go too… *follows*
+RavenCool: *follows*
-RavenCool: *follows*
+Tracker: I'm going to stay with the ship and see if I can repair it.
 ???: HEEEELLLLPPP!!!
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 Frankie: No wonder that girl screamed...
-???: ''SAVE ME!''
+???: LET GO OF ME!!
 Tracker: Hey, that was a different voice!
-Frankie: Something's not right here, we'll be in deep trouble if we're not careful-*gets grabbed*
+Frankie: Something's not right here, we'll be in deep trouble if we're not careful- *gets grabbed*
 Wreck: Frankie? Hello? ''Frankie?''
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 ???: Shh, my Mobian friend. You will be fine, as will your little pals. *puts RavenCool to sleep*
-Vultro: Guys, we need to find everyone RIGHT NOW! Let's split up. Spark, Wreck, come with me. Jenny, go with Terry and Tracker.
+Vultro: Guys, we need to find everyone RIGHT NOW! Let's split up. Spark, Wreck, come with me. Jenny, go with Terry.
-(silence)
-Vultro: Tracker? Tracker..? Oh no.
 ==='''Chapter 2 - The Bad Guys'''===