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 <span style="color:#654321;">Tracker</span> is a Bloodhound from the future city of [[Techtown]], a cybercity famous in its time for its technology and unique regional accent (which resembles the real life accent of Northern England.) Born some time in the early 32nd century, Tracker lived in Techtown until he was chosen to embark on a time travel mission to Mobius in order to prevent a millennium-long chain of events that would eventually destroy the town. He elects to come along with Vultro as he believes that visiting Ethos, the original destination, was an integral part of securing the safety of Techtown. He has an incredible sense of smell as well as a considerable amount of strength.
-. Amber "Spark" Valencia (Shapeshifting, [[User:97.82.153.89|97.82.153.89]], now [[User:SnowlessWinter|SnowlessWinter]])
+. Shift the Hedgecat (Shapeshifting, [[User:er1c1996|er1c1996]])
-Originally, <span style="color:#B2B200;">Spark</span> was written as a spiked Wildcat/Hedgehog mix ("Hedgecat") from Mobius. However, SnowlessWinter has long since rewritten the character into a new character Amber Valencia, and requested Spark's removal. I am awaiting a request to rewrite the redesigned character in the story, else I will rewrite a new shapeshifting character to fill Spark's place.
+<span style="color:#B2B200;">Shift</span> was originally written as a different character by [[User:SnowlessWinter|SnowlessWinter]]. However, she has long since rewritten the character in question and requested the removal of this version. With her permission, I have rewritten this character's design and abilities into my own new character, named Shift. Shift is a spiked Wildcat/Hedgehog mix ("Hedgecat") from Mobius. She has shapeshifting abilities and it able to take the form of many natural creatures. While not often the most popular in the group, her abilities often come in great handy and thus always comes along on adventures with Vultro.
 . [[Jenny the Fox]] (Ingenuity/Mystic Ability, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]])
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 ==='''Chapter 1 - Prolouge'''===
-The story begins on a spaceship, where we see <span style="color:#A89070;">Vultro</span>, <span style="color:#0000FF;">RavenCool</span>, <span style="color:#FF4500;">Wreck,</span> <span style="color:#8e0000;">Frankie,</span> <span style="color:#654321;">Tracker,</span> <span style="color:#B2B200;">Spark,</span> <span style="color:#a8a8a8;">Jenny,</span> <span style="color:#006400;">Terry,</span> and <span style="color:#a97c00;">Lightning</span>.
+The story begins on a spaceship, where we see <span style="color:#A89070;">Vultro</span>, <span style="color:#0000FF;">RavenCool</span>, <span style="color:#FF4500;">Wreck,</span> <span style="color:#8e0000;">Frankie,</span> <span style="color:#654321;">Tracker,</span> <span style="color:#B2B200;">Shift,</span> <span style="color:#a8a8a8;">Jenny,</span> <span style="color:#006400;">Terry,</span> and <span style="color:#a97c00;">Lightning</span>.
 Vultro: Alright guys, we should be arriving on Ethos any minute now!
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 Frankie: It's a surprise! Don't you worry!
-Spark: Hey Vultro, where are we anyway?
+Shift: Hey Vultro, where are we anyway?
 Vultro: I just told yo guys, we're.... uh oh. That's not good...
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 <span style="line-height:20px;">RavenCool: Everyone alright? Anyone that can't swim?</span>
-Spark surfaces nearby in the form of a dolphin.
+Shift surfaces nearby in the form of a dolphin.
-<span style="line-height:20px;">Spark: If not, I can give you a ride!</span>
+<span style="line-height:20px;">Shift: If not, I can give you a ride!</span>
-Vultro breaks the surface, thrashing towards Spark desperately. As he reaches Spark, he scurries frantically onto his back.
+Vultro breaks the surface, thrashing towards Shift desperately. As he reaches Shift, he scurries frantically onto his back.
-<span style="line-height:20px;">Vultro: Thank god we brought you along, Spark. Where'd everyone else go?</span>
+<span style="line-height:20px;">Vultro: Thank god we brought you along, Shift. Where'd everyone else go?</span>
 <span style="line-height:20px;">RavenCool: What's the matter Vultro, don't know how to swim?</span>
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 Jenny: Not without a Chaos Emerald or two...
-Vultro: Alright well <span style="line-height:20px;">Spark, head over to land. We need to see what's around, if anything.</span>
+Vultro: Alright well <span style="line-height:20px;">Shift, head over to land. We need to see what's around, if anything.</span>
 RavenCool: Vultro, hold on to this.
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 ???: HEEEELLLLPPP!!!
-Vultro: That came from over there!! Spark, follow that scream!
+Vultro: That came from over there!! Shift, follow that scream!
 Frankie: Hey look! It's a cave!
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 Wreck: That must be where the scream came from.
-The group enters the cave. It is faintly illuminated  by the sunlight outside, but hard to see very far into. Vultro climbs off of Spark onto dry land.
+The group enters the cave. It is faintly illuminated  by the sunlight outside, but hard to see very far into. Vultro climbs off of Shift onto dry land.
 Vultro: I hate caves.
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 Vultro and the crew hear the yell for help, but are unsure where in the cave it came from.
-Vultro: Guys, we need to find everyone RIGHT NOW! Let's split up. Spark, Wreck, come with me. Jenny, Terry, go with Lightning.
+Vultro: Guys, we need to find everyone RIGHT NOW! Let's split up. Shift, Wreck, come with me. Jenny, Terry, go with Lightning.
 ==='''Chapter 2 - The Bad Guys'''===
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 Frankie: Yeah… We need to sorta, you know. ''FIND HIM!''
-Spark pulls out a sickle, holding it to Mist's throat.
+Shift pulls out a sickle, holding it to Mist's throat.
-Spark: Stay down, you hear me!
+Shift: Stay down, you hear me!
 Lighting: Guys, we should look for our friends. They could be hurt! RavenCool, please stay alive...
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 Red: Lets follow them.
-Spark: Who are you two anyways?
+Shift: Who are you two anyways?
 Red: I'm Shimmer the Hedgehog.
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 Pink: And I'm Penelope! *smiles* And we just made a deal with RavenCool, so now we're apart of your team!! Ask Shimm for the details.
-Spark: Cool, I'm Spark.
+Shift: Cool, I'm Shift.
-Penelope: Nice to meet you Spark! *smiles*
+Penelope: Nice to meet you Shift! *smiles*
 Vultro: And I'm Vultro the Fennec. Penelope, Shimmer, nice to meet you.
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 Shimmer: Penny is right. Lets get finding! So where did you last see them?
-Spark: Hold on a sec!
+Shift: Hold on a sec!
-Spark transforms into a Bloodhound, mimicking the appearance of Tracker. He points his snout into the air and begins sniffing. After a moment, he points towards the smell.
+Shift transforms into a Bloodhound, mimicking the appearance of Tracker. He points his snout into the air and begins sniffing. After a moment, he points towards the smell.
-Spark: That way!
+Shift: That way!
 Tracker: I could have just done that myself, mate...
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 Penelope: Let's just go!
-The heroes follow Spark for what seems like miles.
+The heroes follow Shift for what seems like miles.
-Vultro: Are you sure you're going the right way, Spark?
+Vultro: Are you sure you're going the right way, Shift?
 Penelope: We've been walking for like, FOREVER! When will we get there?
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 Tracker: How about you just let me, THE BLOODY BLOODHOUND, handle it?
-Spark: Guys, stop teaming up on me. I'm trying my best...
+Shift: Guys, stop teaming up on me. I'm trying my best...
-Penelope pats Spark on the back encouragingly.
+Penelope pats Shift on the back encouragingly.
-Penelope: It's okay Spark, you're doing great, but let's follow RavenCool instead for a bit.
+Penelope: It's okay Shift, you're doing great, but let's follow RavenCool instead for a bit.
 Shimmer: Yes, let's.
-Vultro: Wait RavenCool... should we split up? What if Spark is actually on to something.
+Vultro: Wait RavenCool... should we split up? What if Shift is actually on to something.
 RavenCool begins to nod, but stops with her head high in the air. She begins to sniff furiously.
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 RavenCool: Shh! It's right on the tip of my nose...
-Spark turns the other direction, taking a deep sniff of the air.
+Shift turns the other direction, taking a deep sniff of the air.
-Spark: I smell... something evil. Whatever it is, it's NOT a friendly smell.
+Shift: I smell... something evil. Whatever it is, it's NOT a friendly smell.
-RavenCool: Well Spark, ''I'' smell a hedgehog. That would be Lighting.
+RavenCool: Well Shift, ''I'' smell a hedgehog. That would be Lighting.
 Shimmer: You guys are both good at smelling.
-Vultro: Spark? What direction is that bad smell coming from?
+Vultro: Shift? What direction is that bad smell coming from?
-Spark: The one I smell is coming from the northeast!
+Shift: The one I smell is coming from the northeast!
 RavenCool: Well the one ''I'' smell is coming from the west.
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 Vultro: I said let's split up, Raven.
-Raven heads off to the west, taking Wreck, Vultro, and Terry with her. Tracker, Penelope, and Shimmer follow Spark.
+Raven heads off to the west, taking Wreck, Vultro, and Terry with her. Tracker, Penelope, and Shimmer follow Shift.
 RavenCool: *continues sniffing*
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 Darkmall: You're a couple of clever foxes, such a shame you'll both have to die!
-Suddenly a spiked chain flies into Darkmall's neck. It begins to spark and electrocute him. Darkmall yells and falls to his knees. In jumps a slender, orange cat wearing high tech armor.
+Suddenly a spiked chain flies into Darkmall's neck. It begins to Shift and electrocute him. Darkmall yells and falls to his knees. In jumps a slender, orange cat wearing high tech armor.
 ???: The name's Sico. You folks in trouble?