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 + years later, I'm back again. Realizing how poorly written this was, but that it has potential, I'm in the process of rewriting the story. I will try to preserve as much of the original story as possible, and stay <u>faithful to the characters as written by their original users</u>, as every user in this story besides me has been inactive for years now. If you return and want your character removed though, let me know. '''<u>If anyone wants to join, I encourage it.</u>'''
-<nowiki> </nowiki>It's been brought to my attention that the script format is off putting to some. While I agree that a novel format is better for these kinds of stories, it was written this way originally, and I have yet to decide if it is worth rewriting. After all, it is way easier to draft a scene with a lot of dialogue when it doesn't have to be structured into paragraphs.
+<nowiki> </nowiki>It's been brought to my attention that the script format is off putting to some. While I agree that a novel format is better for these kinds of stories, it was written this way originally, and I have yet to decide if it is worth rewriting. After all, it is way easier to draft a scene with a lot of dialogue when it doesn't have to be structured into paragraphs. I also am in the process of improving the format. Look at the ending scenes to see what I want the whole story to look like, as the rest probably looks a bit rough.
 ~ [[User:er1c1996|LeifEricson]]. June 21, 2018.