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 Shimm scoffs. "Yeah, right. Penny, come on. Let's show this clown who's boss." Shimm shoves past Shift, and Penny follows shortly behind him. Shift shakes her head, and then draws her sickle. Shimm jumps up, and goes for a high kick at the blue hedgehog.
-As Shimm would hit Crys, he'd feel his leg stop - the Crys he thought he hit had suddenly turned into ice, and Crys used it to trap Shimm. Scoffing at the boy, Crys stabbed his rapier into the ground, and an ice spike rose in front of Shift.
+As Shimm would hit the hedgehog, he feels his leg suddenly stop-- he has turned into ice, which has also encased Shimm's foot. The ice begins to travel up Shimm's body, freezing him in midair. Scoffing at the boy, the hedgehog stabbed his rapier into the ground. Ice spikes rose out of the ground, surrounding the rest of the crew.
+"Who are you and what do you want with us?" Penny yells out. "We crashed here, we really do have nothing!" Tracker adds.
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