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4+ years later, I'm back again. Realizing how poorly written this was, but that it has potential, I'm in the process of rewriting the story. I will try to preserve as much of the original story as possible, and stay <u>faithful to the characters as written by their original users</u>, as every user in this story besides me has been inactive for years now. If you return and want your character removed though, let me know. '''<u>If anyone wants to join, I encourage it.</u>''' | 4+ years later, I'm back again. Realizing how poorly written this was, but that it has potential, I'm in the process of rewriting the story. I will try to preserve as much of the original story as possible, and stay <u>faithful to the characters as written by their original users</u>, as every user in this story besides me has been inactive for years now. If you return and want your character removed though, let me know. '''<u>If anyone wants to join, I encourage it.</u>''' | ||
<nowiki> </nowiki>It's been brought to my attention that the script format is off putting to some. While I agree that a novel format is better for these kinds of stories, it was written this way originally, and I have yet to decide if it is worth rewriting. After all, it is way easier to draft a scene with a lot of dialogue when it doesn't have to be structured into paragraphs. I also am in the process of improving the format. Look at the ending scenes to see what I want the whole story to look like, as the rest probably looks a bit rough. | <nowiki> </nowiki>It's been brought to my attention that the script format is off putting to some. While I agree that a novel format is better for these kinds of stories, it was written this way originally, and I have yet to decide if it is worth rewriting. After all, it is way easier to draft a scene with a lot of dialogue when it doesn't have to be structured into paragraphs. I also am in the process of improving the format. Look at the ending scenes to see what I want the whole story to look like, as the rest probably looks a bit rough. | ||
~ [[User:er1c1996|LeifEricson]]. June 21, 2018. | ~ [[User:er1c1996|LeifEricson]]. June 21, 2018. | ||
== Rules == | == Rules == | ||
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#Anyone can join, and anyone write the story, if they have a character in it. | #Anyone can join, and anyone write the story, if they have a character in it. | ||
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#Please leave a comment or message LeifEricson#2544 on Discord instead of placing any out of character questions in the story. | #Please leave a comment or message LeifEricson#2544 on Discord instead of placing any out of character questions in the story. | ||
#Have fun! | #Have fun! | ||
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==Overview== | ==Overview== | ||
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2. [[RavenCool the Sol Grey Wolf]] (Power/Mystic Ability, [[User:24.58.83.171|24.58.83.171]], now [[User:RavenCool the Wolf|RavenCool the Wolf]]) | 2. [[RavenCool the Sol Grey Wolf]] (Power/Mystic Ability, [[User:24.58.83.171|24.58.83.171]], now [[User:RavenCool the Wolf|RavenCool the Wolf]]) | ||
<span style="color:#0000FF;">RavenCool</span> is a Grey Wolf that was born in the Sol dimension, a mystical realm controlled by the 7 Sol Emeralds. She has a white muzzle, wears red and blue armor, and has specially crafted boots to fit her paw-like feet (a feature uncommon to Mobians.) At the age of 6, her dad was murdered by a being named Ix, enraging her but causing her to flee to Mobius where she met Vultro. A fierce warrior with a coarse personality, Raven usually only shows her kindness to Vultro. As the heir apparent of guardian of the Sol dimension, she is sometimes allowed possession of the Sol Emeralds, under the careful watch of the current guardian [[Blaze the Cat]]. | <span style="color:#0000FF;">RavenCool</span> is a Grey Wolf that was born in the Sol dimension, a mystical realm controlled by the 7 Sol Emeralds. She has a white muzzle, wears red and blue armor, and has specially crafted boots to fit her paw-like feet (a feature uncommon to Mobians.) At the age of 6, her dad was murdered by a being named Ix, enraging her but causing her to flee to Mobius where she met Vultro. A fierce warrior with a coarse personality, Raven usually only shows her kindness to Vultro. As the heir apparent of guardian of the Sol dimension, she is sometimes allowed possession of the Sol Emeralds, under the careful watch of the current guardian [[Blaze the Cat]]. | ||
3. [[Wreck the Fox]] (Strength/Stamina, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | 3. [[Wreck the Fox]] (Strength/Stamina, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | ||
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7. [[Jenny the Fox]] (Ingenuity/Mystic Ability, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | 7. [[Jenny the Fox]] (Ingenuity/Mystic Ability, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | ||
<span style="color:#a8a8a8;">Jenny</span> is a Arctic Fox from Mobius. She is similar in size to Vultro, sporting platinum fur, a bushy tail, and ice blue gloves and clothing. She was extensively trained by her mother in Chaos magic, being able to cast spells even without a Chaos Emerald present. She is the half sister of Vultro, sharing the same father but different mothers, though they are not aware of this fact at the beginning of the story. Unbeknownst to herself, she is also capable of harnessing the power of the Shoten crystal, having inherited the ability from her father. | <span style="color:#a8a8a8;">Jenny</span> is a Arctic Fox from Mobius. She is similar in size to Vultro, sporting platinum fur, a bushy tail, and ice blue gloves and clothing. She was extensively trained by her mother in Chaos magic, being able to cast spells even without a Chaos Emerald present. She is the half sister of Vultro, sharing the same father but different mothers, though they are not aware of this fact at the beginning of the story. Unbeknownst to herself, she is also capable of harnessing the power of the Shoten crystal, having inherited the ability from her father. | ||
8. [[Terry the beaver|Terry the Beaver]] (Ingenuity/Swiftness, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | 8. [[Terry the beaver|Terry the Beaver]] (Ingenuity/Swiftness, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | ||
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=== Villains === | === Villains === | ||
1. [[Databyte Egg]] ([[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | 1. [[Databyte Egg]] (Combat, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | ||
Databyte Egg is a robot designed by [[Dr. Ivo Robotnik]] in Techtown that gained sentience and turned against his orders. His model number is E-112B, placing his design somewhere in between E-102 Gamma and E-123 Omega. Unlike those two which turned somewhat good, it decided to stay evil, instead developing its own evil agenda. After encountering Mist the Morph and receiving an upgrade from him, the two joined forces in a quest to take over the galaxy. Databyte has a superior targeting and ammunition system that makes him deadly to any foe that crosses him. Unlike Mist, whose creator had programmed him to accurately mimic human speech patterns, Databyte's voice is monotone and robotic. | Databyte Egg is a robot designed by [[Dr. Ivo Robotnik]] in Techtown that gained sentience and turned against his orders. His model number is E-112B, placing his design somewhere in between E-102 Gamma and E-123 Omega. Unlike those two which turned somewhat good, it decided to stay evil, instead developing its own evil agenda. After encountering Mist the Morph and receiving an upgrade from him, the two joined forces in a quest to take over the galaxy. Databyte has a superior targeting and ammunition system that makes him deadly to any foe that crosses him. Unlike Mist, whose creator had programmed him to accurately mimic human speech patterns, Databyte's voice is monotone and robotic. | ||
2. [[Mist the Morph]] ([[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | 2. [[Mist the Morph]] (Shapeshifting, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | ||
Mist is an artificial being created in Techtown Having been programmed with shapeshifting abilities, it always prefers to take a form other than himself. When forced to be in his natural form, he resembles a dark grey featureless hedgehog, having no spikes, clothing, nose or pupils. He was created by Mammoth Mogul with express purpose of killing them. He has since learned to mimic human speech and emotion, developing his own ruthless personality and evil desires. After meeting Databyte and pitying his low quality parts, he upgraded Databyte's targeting computer, becoming the closest thing to a friend that he has. | Mist is an artificial being created in Techtown Having been programmed with shapeshifting abilities, it always prefers to take a form other than himself. When forced to be in his natural form, he resembles a dark grey featureless hedgehog, having no spikes, clothing, nose or pupils. He was created by Mammoth Mogul with express purpose of killing them. He has since learned to mimic human speech and emotion, developing his own ruthless personality and evil desires. After meeting Databyte and pitying his low quality parts, he upgraded Databyte's targeting computer, becoming the closest thing to a friend that he has. | ||
3. Metal RavenCool ([[User:24.58.83.171|24.58.83.171]], now [[User:RavenCool the Wolf|RavenCool the Wolf]]) | 3. Metal RavenCool (Mystic Ability, [[User:24.58.83.171|24.58.83.171]], now [[User:RavenCool the Wolf|RavenCool the Wolf]]) | ||
4. [[Lunic the hedgehog|Lunic the Hedgehog]] ([[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | 4. [[Lunic the hedgehog|Lunic the Hedgehog]] (Ingenuity, [[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | ||
Lunic is a Mobian hedgehog that resembles Manic the Hedgehog. His fur is blue, his eyes are red, and he wears a black jacket. He also has a purple streak on his left leg, the origins of which are unknown. After traveling through time as a teenager and seeing that in the future evil prevails, he decides to become a villain. | Lunic is a Mobian hedgehog that resembles Manic the Hedgehog. His fur is blue, his eyes are red, and he wears a black jacket. He also has a purple streak on his left leg, the origins of which are unknown. After traveling through time as a teenager and seeing that in the future evil prevails, he decides to become a villain. | ||
5. Solidus the Werefox ([[User:er1c1996|er1c1996]]) | 5. Solidus the Werefox (Mystic Ability, [[User:er1c1996|er1c1996]]) | ||
Solidus is a Werefox and the evil alter ego of Obelus the Fennec, Vultro and Jenny's father. After transforming into Solidus, he stole the Shoten crystal and used it to manifest himself as a separate entity from Obelus, allowing him to murder both Obelus and his wife, Lily the Silverfox. Possessing no body, he appears as a ghostly spirit, requiring the Shoten crystal to remain in this dimension. He is desperately searching for a way to create a corporeal form, which is why he is searching remote planets such as Elilaela for other powerful gemstones. | Solidus is a Werefox and the evil alter ego of Obelus the Fennec, Vultro and Jenny's father. After transforming into Solidus, he stole the Shoten crystal and used it to manifest himself as a separate entity from Obelus, allowing him to murder both Obelus and his wife, Lily the Silverfox. Possessing no body, he appears as a ghostly spirit, requiring the Shoten crystal to remain in this dimension. He is desperately searching for a way to create a corporeal form, which is why he is searching remote planets such as Elilaela for other powerful gemstones. | ||
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7. Darkmall ([[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | 7. Darkmall ([[User:92.4.213.78|92.4.213.78]], now [[User:The Evilbreaker|The Evilbreaker]]) | ||
8. Crys the Hedgehog (Cryokinesis, [[User:MaxIrvaron|MaxIrvaron]]) | |||
Crys Wynter is a blue Hedgehog with three droopy quills, two of which point sideways. He wears a dark blue and white shirt, along with jeans with a golden lining. Crys holds a grudge against his sister Alexia, whom he is always trying to kill. Using magic gifted to him by [https://sonic.wikia.com/wiki/Tikal Tikal the Echnidna], Crys came to Elilaela first to ravage its resources, but ultimately to take it over. Crys can harness the mositure in bodies of water, and even out of the air, in order to create ice at will. Using a very powerful magic, he can also create golden ice, only destroyed by powerful energy such as that of the Chaos Emeralds. Due to the effort it takes to create said ice, he avoids using it unless absolutely necessary. Crys is a very cold person, very off-putting and usually a lone wolf. He also appaers to be selfish, not caring for others. He is however extremely driven, and will not stop until he achieves his goals. | |||
==Story== | ==Story== | ||
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==='''Chapter 1 - Prolouge'''=== | ==='''Chapter 1 - Prolouge'''=== | ||
The story begins on a spaceship, where we see Vultro, RavenCool, Wreck, Frankie, Tracker, Shift, Jenny, Terry, and Lightning. Vultro looks at the crew with excitement. | The story begins on a spaceship, where we see Vultro, RavenCool, Wreck, Frankie, Tracker, Shift, Jenny, Terry, and Lightning. Vultro looks at the crew with excitement. | ||
Vultro: Alright guys, we should be arriving on Ethos any minute now! | Vultro: Alright guys, we should be arriving on Ethos any minute now! | ||
Wreck looks over at Vultro, then at Frankie, looking annoyed at Vultro's optimism. | Wreck looks over at Vultro, then at Frankie, looking annoyed at Vultro's optimism. | ||
Wreck: Ugh, why exactly am I here again Frankie? | Wreck: Ugh, why exactly am I here again Frankie? | ||
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Frankie: It's a surprise! Don't you worry! | Frankie: It's a surprise! Don't you worry! | ||
Shift walks over to Vultro, taking a look out the window of the ship. | Shift walks over to Vultro, taking a look out the window of the ship. | ||
Shift: Hey Vultro, where are we anyway? | Shift: Hey Vultro, where are we anyway? | ||
Vultro: I just told you guys, we're.... uh oh. That's not good.. | Vultro: I just told you guys, we're.... uh oh. That's not good.. | ||
Vultro looks down at the dashboard, seeing something that turns his expression to that of major concern. | Vultro looks down at the dashboard, seeing something that turns his expression to that of major concern. | ||
Frankie: What? What's not good? | Frankie: What? What's not good? | ||
Vultro points to the radar scanner, which shows an uncharted planet rapidly approaching. | Vultro points to the radar scanner, which shows an uncharted planet rapidly approaching. | ||
Vultro: We're heading straight for a nearby planet, and it's most certainly NOT Ethos. | Vultro: We're heading straight for a nearby planet, and it's most certainly NOT Ethos. | ||
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RavenCool is tied up in a corner of the cave, and is just beginning to regain consciousness. An unknown figure is standing next to her. | RavenCool is tied up in a corner of the cave, and is just beginning to regain consciousness. An unknown figure is standing next to her. | ||
???: Now I'll just be taking these Sol Emeralds, thank you! | ???: Now I'll just be taking these Sol Emeralds, thank you! | ||
The figure plucks the Sol Emeralds out of the chest plate of RavenCool, which has six of the seven stones arranged in a circular pattern. | The figure plucks the Sol Emeralds out of the chest plate of RavenCool, which has six of the seven stones arranged in a circular pattern. | ||
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Frankie: Mist… is that you…? Whoever... you're… working… for… will… ''be… '''stopped.''''' | Frankie: Mist… is that you…? Whoever... you're… working… for… will… ''be… '''stopped.''''' | ||
Mist: Oooh, oh ''nooo'', the little stupid weakened bat wants to stop me, ooh oh no. | Mist: Oooh, oh ''nooo'', the little stupid weakened bat wants to stop me, ooh oh no. | ||
Lightning, Terry, and Jenny come up behind the rest of the group, and watch the exchange silently. Mist then transforms into a demonic looking red humanoid, one that is presumably immune to the lava's heat. Metal RavenCool grabs RavenCool by the collar. | Lightning, Terry, and Jenny come up behind the rest of the group, and watch the exchange silently. Mist then transforms into a demonic looking red humanoid, one that is presumably immune to the lava's heat. Metal RavenCool grabs RavenCool by the collar. | ||
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Lighting: Hey, give us back RavenCool, Metal! | Lighting: Hey, give us back RavenCool, Metal! | ||
Vultro then looks over at Metal RavenCool's sash, in which she has placed the six Sol Emeralds. The center is studded with a mysterious, lime-green crystal with a web of blue crystals running throughout it. He leans over to Lightning. | Vultro then looks over at Metal RavenCool's sash, in which she has placed the six Sol Emeralds. The center is studded with a mysterious, lime-green crystal with a web of blue crystals running throughout it. He leans over to Lightning. | ||
Vultro: Hey, Lightning.... what's that thing Metal's got? On her sash? It looks like some sort of crystal, but I've never seen one of that shape before. | Vultro: Hey, Lightning.... what's that thing Metal's got? On her sash? It looks like some sort of crystal, but I've never seen one of that shape before. | ||
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Vultro: Just when I thought this would be difficult! | Vultro: Just when I thought this would be difficult! | ||
Suddenly, the crystal starts glowing, and Vultro feels a surge of energy entering his body. | Suddenly, the crystal starts glowing, and Vultro feels a surge of energy entering his body. | ||
Metal: What!? How--! | Metal: What!? How--! | ||
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<span style="line-height:20px;">BAM. Vultro is hit over the head from behind. A booming, menacing voice comes from his direction.</span> | <span style="line-height:20px;">BAM. Vultro is hit over the head from behind. A booming, menacing voice comes from his direction.</span> | ||
???: Foolsh child. | ???: Foolsh child. | ||
Vultro falls to the floor unconscious, his fur reverting to normal. The mysterious figure picks up the crystal, embedding it into his belt. He appears to have features of both a fox and a wolf, having large fennec ears but sharp wolf fangs, and stands about as tall as RavenCool. He has tan fur, though he is also slightly transparent. | Vultro falls to the floor unconscious, his fur reverting to normal. The mysterious figure picks up the crystal, embedding it into his belt. He appears to have features of both a fox and a wolf, having large fennec ears but sharp wolf fangs, and stands about as tall as RavenCool. He has tan fur, though he is also slightly transparent. | ||
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Solidus: Looks like I showed up at just the right time. | Solidus: Looks like I showed up at just the right time. | ||
Metal RavenCool: Divine... Sol! | Metal RavenCool: Divine... Sol! | ||
In a yellow flash, the two disappear. Wreck, afraid that Frankie will be taken away, steps forward towards Mist. | In a yellow flash, the two disappear. Wreck, afraid that Frankie will be taken away, steps forward towards Mist. | ||
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He throws a punch at Mist, hitting him square in the jaw. Mist falls onto his knees, and Wreck kicks him down to the floor. He then turns to Solidus. | He throws a punch at Mist, hitting him square in the jaw. Mist falls onto his knees, and Wreck kicks him down to the floor. He then turns to Solidus. | ||
Wreck: And you too, huh? | Wreck: And you too, huh? | ||
He throws a punch at Solidus, but his fist goes straight through. Wreck tumbles to the ground. | He throws a punch at Solidus, but his fist goes straight through. Wreck tumbles to the ground. | ||
Solidus: Hahaha! It's of no use. | Solidus: Hahaha! It's of no use. | ||
Solidus grabs Vultro and teleports away in a burst of flames. | Solidus grabs Vultro and teleports away in a burst of flames. | ||
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RavenCool and Vultro are in a small room, with bare walls and only a tiny opening serving as a window. RavenCool is pounding on the walls furiously. She roars loudly. | RavenCool and Vultro are in a small room, with bare walls and only a tiny opening serving as a window. RavenCool is pounding on the walls furiously. She roars loudly. | ||
RavenCool: How do you get out of here! | RavenCool: How do you get out of here! | ||
An unfamiliar voice comes from through the wall. | An unfamiliar voice comes from through the wall. | ||
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RavenCool walks over to Vultro, using her tail to reach his belt and grab the green emerald. | RavenCool walks over to Vultro, using her tail to reach his belt and grab the green emerald. | ||
RavenCool: I have no idea what is going to happen, but we have to try. | RavenCool: I have no idea what is going to happen, but we have to try. | ||
RavenCool plants her feet, and slams the emerald into the slot on her chest plate with her tail. She takes a deep breath, and grabs onto Vultro with her tail. Metal Ravencool hears the clang from the other side of the wall. | RavenCool plants her feet, and slams the emerald into the slot on her chest plate with her tail. She takes a deep breath, and grabs onto Vultro with her tail. Metal Ravencool hears the clang from the other side of the wall. | ||
Metal RavenCool: Go check on the prisoners, and make sure you take that last Sol Emerald from the fox. | Metal RavenCool: Go check on the prisoners, and make sure you take that last Sol Emerald from the fox. | ||
Solidus: Only Sol beings can harness that power, what does it matter. Their hands are tied anyways. | Solidus: Only Sol beings can harness that power, what does it matter. Their hands are tied anyways. | ||
Metal RavenCool: You idiot. The wolf is a Sol being, and she's in there with him! Make sure they don't leave. | Metal RavenCool: You idiot. The wolf is a Sol being, and she's in there with him! Make sure they don't leave. | ||
Solidus walks around the corner to the window, and notices the two about to escape. He makes eye contact with RavenCool, who smirks at him smugly. | Solidus walks around the corner to the window, and notices the two about to escape. He makes eye contact with RavenCool, who smirks at him smugly. | ||
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Databyte: Yeah, and your tirade was ruined when you forgot the word "sensible." | Databyte: Yeah, and your tirade was ruined when you forgot the word "sensible." | ||
Mist tries to stifle a laugh, but has a hard time containing himself. | Mist tries to stifle a laugh, but has a hard time containing himself. | ||
Solidus glances at him furiously, and grabs a hold of Metal RavenCool's sash, putting it on himself. He then takes the Shoten crystal from his belt, and places it in the middle of the sash. Suddenly a blinding flash fills the room. He emerges surrounded by a rainbow colored aura, his fur a bright purple. His very energy is palpable from across the room. | Solidus glances at him furiously, and grabs a hold of Metal RavenCool's sash, putting it on himself. He then takes the Shoten crystal from his belt, and places it in the middle of the sash. Suddenly a blinding flash fills the room. He emerges surrounded by a rainbow colored aura, his fur a bright purple. His very energy is palpable from across the room. | ||
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Solidus: Now... lets find those prisoners. Lunic, the Sol Taps. | Solidus: Now... lets find those prisoners. Lunic, the Sol Taps. | ||
Lunic hands over the black device along with a few others exactly like it. | Lunic hands over the black device along with a few others exactly like it. | ||
Solidus: Take one of these, and an emerald so you can teleport if need be, and meet back here when you find them. Understood? | Solidus: Take one of these, and an emerald so you can teleport if need be, and meet back here when you find them. Understood? | ||
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Penelope pats Shift on the back encouragingly. | Penelope pats Shift on the back encouragingly. | ||
Penelope: It's okay Shift, you're doing great, but let's follow RavenCool instead for a bit. | Penelope: It's okay Shift, you're doing great, but let's follow RavenCool instead for a bit. | ||
Shimmer: Yes, let's. | Shimmer: Yes, let's. | ||
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Wreck: Shuddup, Terry. | Wreck: Shuddup, Terry. | ||
RavenCool: There's a million and one scents around me ten times stronger that aren't Lightning, ok? Geez. | RavenCool: There's a million and one scents around me ten times stronger that aren't Lightning, ok? Geez. | ||
Terry: Sorry... | Terry: Sorry... | ||
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Darkmall: You're gonna have to pry that information from my cold, dead paws. | Darkmall: You're gonna have to pry that information from my cold, dead paws. | ||
RavenCool: Galdly. | RavenCool: Galdly. | ||
RavenCool roars loudly, pouncing towards Darkmall. Darkmall grabs her by the throat, then choke slams her down into the dirt. | RavenCool roars loudly, pouncing towards Darkmall. Darkmall grabs her by the throat, then choke slams her down into the dirt. | ||
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Vultro glances at Wreck, who nods approvingly. Vultro darts between Darkmall's legs. As Darkmall tries to find him, Vultro chomps down as hard as he can on the back of Darkmall's ankle. | Vultro glances at Wreck, who nods approvingly. Vultro darts between Darkmall's legs. As Darkmall tries to find him, Vultro chomps down as hard as he can on the back of Darkmall's ankle. | ||
Darkmall: GAAAAHHHH! You annoying pest!! | Darkmall: GAAAAHHHH! You annoying pest!! | ||
Wreck, now behind Darkmall, punches him square in the back. | Wreck, now behind Darkmall, punches him square in the back. | ||
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Darkmall looks up, wincing slightly each time the chain sparks. | Darkmall looks up, wincing slightly each time the chain sparks. | ||
Darkmall: I…am not…the kind of guy…who falls-- WHO FALLS IN ONE HIT!!! | Darkmall: I…am not…the kind of guy…who falls-- WHO FALLS IN ONE HIT!!! | ||
Darkmall grabs the spiked chain, yanking it out of his neck. Without any further hesitation, he turns and points his hands at Sico. | Darkmall grabs the spiked chain, yanking it out of his neck. Without any further hesitation, he turns and points his hands at Sico. | ||
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